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The Parker Murder- Chapter One by Iza-nagi The Parker Murder- Chapter One by Iza-nagi

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Prologue


DISCLAIMER: I wrote this a LONG LONG ago, so dont rage at me for grammar errors. Also, Slick's accent is made up, so dont go around thinking, "Why is he talking weird?" XD
This chap gives a basic intro of the gang. Its discontinued from the prologue but you get a basic idea who who is. xD

Hope you like!
Please dont use as your own,

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:iconcrysanthemum963:
Woah...I finally got a chance to read this. This is so awesome. I love eeeeverything about this. You described your characters very well. And I felt like I was right behind the gang as everything was going on.
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Iza-nagi May 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
im realy grateful you read this! :hug:
and also, apologies for not uploading the rest of it.... i will have to go through them first, so allow me some time ^_^
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:iconcrysanthemum963:
Oh, don't worry, I can wait xP.
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Iza-nagi May 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:D phew!
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tehawsumninja Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow...that imagery and setting was completely coherent and interesting to say the least!

I really love all of the introductions, first by name-less students talking about the issue at hand, then their names, and seeing the characters' personalities from the other characters' views. I think it is so cool how you do this, it is just so easy to read as the words flow line by line.

I actually like how you added in the grammar for Slick's jargon, it gives the story character.

I love it Izanagi, just absolute bliss reading it ^^
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Iza-nagi Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks! you know what, after reading everybody's comments here, I actually realized I didnt read this since 4 years LOL.... My writing style right now has evolved into a more, well, film-ish format thanks to studies but I like the way I wrote this as well xDD hehe next chap is on Apr 14
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tehawsumninja Apr 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Whoa, really? That long?!!! That's amazing...

On the 14th, huh....10 days of pure agony XD
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Iza-nagi Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
XD dont worry im sure it will be a lot less painful xD
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tehawsumninja Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ahahaha XD
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